Hi my name is Victorya and for my 20% project I choose to write a short story(novella). My goal for week 1 I had chosen to add more description to my characters so that when people would read my novella they would be able to visualize it perfectly fine and revise mistakes that I hadn’t noticed before and that I needed to change for my story to make more sense and make it look more professional. I achieved that goal because I did have enough time to add more description to all my characters like how sound when they talk or how their hair moves when the wind blows through their hair or how their face changes expressions when they are speaking with anther character. I also had time to revise the little mistakes in my novella like missing periods, commas, capitalizing my “I”s, where to begin new paragraphs and where to end my sentences and not keep them going on forever and ever.